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Thursday, 16 May 2019

My writing for today Havin

The lights flickered and then went off, then the sirens started, it was coming, we knew it wouldn’t be the last time because of this house it was old and we needed a place to stay it  was not the best but it was ok. It was a two story house and I was staying on the second floor.

I walked up their and it looked fine I open the cretin and I go to look at the window and their is cracks down the bottom of the window.I go to look out the window and I see a bird  on an old tree the tree looked a bit sketch but mum told me not to worry that it would be ok. So I'm just about to go to bed and I pull the blanket and I see a black thing in the corner of room then I yell mum dad and then the light goes out and I hear footsteps coming towards me and I tried to run  but I could not see so Mum ran up with a touch and seen the man and yelled to my dad and said call one one one now.The cops coming now the guy went and hid and and we were down stairs and we hid in the bathroom until the cops came I heard the cops knock on the door I told mum and she said come in they come in with guns and they had heaps of police outside the house and other people.The cops come out and said no one was here and that there was a murder here a few years ago the same gun that was used was in the top floor were I was sleeping and the gun was a revolver and imagine what would happen to me if I did not see him would I die or still be alive.I can not remember what the place was called but I know that if we need to stay anywhere around here never going back their and I will tell all my friends never ever to go their,My mum got robbed and all her money was gone from the wallet there was only about 50 dollars in their and the rest was in the car. I go to pack up the room and I found all the money so I went to go tell mum and  she got all here money back and we have never stayed were we don't know

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